Then Black! I start painting and blinking the suddenly, darkness
enveloped the room. As I see the last bit of light I pass out,I
wake up thinking all the things I went through don’t continue.
Well obviously it did, as I get up I am thinking to go to bed but
something happened. It was so weird that my mind didn’t listen to
me and started walking towards the door. I tried to stop myself
but it just wouldn’t work, it was like my mind had a mind of it’s
own! It was scaring me so much that it was it I black out.
Hello! What a terrible sensation for your character; to know they shouldn’t do something but can’t stop themselves. Your story was quite scary as you created lots of mystery and tension. Well done.